Finnius Posted April 5, 2008 Report Share Posted April 5, 2008 Imperfect names for perfect ideas, fleeting impractical gone never here in a flash things are switched around towns that aren't real just illusions of grandeur just vapors of steam trains on tracks of deception But names are imperfect, and words just the same. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appy Posted April 13, 2008 Report Share Posted April 13, 2008 *huggles* I love this, and you rock! The way the sentences overflow in one another through the single words in between, the things you say (I adore the imagine of city's being illusions of grandeur), very well done. You still know what you're doing *huggles again, just because she can* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kikuyu_Black_Paws Posted April 16, 2008 Report Share Posted April 16, 2008 Myep....shiny! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finnius Posted April 17, 2008 Author Report Share Posted April 17, 2008 *returns the Appy huggles* ^.^ Thanks for all the sparkly nice words! I am glad you liked it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetcherrie Posted April 18, 2008 Report Share Posted April 18, 2008 Words are just words in the end, neh? Only line that interupts it slightly for me is the second one, but that's prolly just me. nice stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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