Silver WInd Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 (edited) Gypsy Dancing in the shadows with fires burning bright within dark pools of watching eyes entranced Edited January 22, 2008 by Silver Wind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted January 21, 2008 Report Share Posted January 21, 2008 Assuming pools of watching was meant. I do that constantly when typing. That and typing "you" instead of "your". I like how in just a few words, I get this mind vision of flaring skirts, bare feet stomping the ground, ankle bells chiming - and the fires burning in the watching eyes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver WInd Posted January 22, 2008 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2008 Thank you arg, hehe I will go correct that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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