Silver WInd Posted November 13, 2007 Report Share Posted November 13, 2007 Drink Serenity found at the bottom of a bottle where troubles seem to drown steadily drip drip drip drop by drop like liquid in an IV it is too late by the time you see your own life is being drained away slowly it begins to fade as old images in a sun worn photograph faces once were familiar now gone it is not lightness that is felt of bad memories washed away but a heaviness like stone in which you sink even faster far below find yourself standing alone drop by drop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted November 18, 2007 Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 I can only react to content not form, but content-wise it is very well said. Alcohol is so much more dangerous than most people of my generation particularly realise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver WInd Posted November 18, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 18, 2007 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted November 20, 2007 Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 I need to borrow your muse for a few days, you seem to have an endless creative font. Cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver WInd Posted November 20, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 20, 2007 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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