Appy Posted April 10, 2007 Report Share Posted April 10, 2007 (edited) Mirror, mirror on the wall Am I real or will I fall? Down the rabbit hole again Back to where it all began? Searching through the darkened woods Little girl in pretty boots Click your heels and call it out When nothing happens, scream and pout Wine red lips and long blond hair High within your tower fair Spinning golden threads so thin Finding beauty deep within [10 april 2007, Den Haag] Edited October 20, 2014 by Appy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted April 10, 2007 Report Share Posted April 10, 2007 I really liked this poem Appy. Liked the rhymes quite a bit. One place where the quite rhytmic reading faltered was the beginning of the third line of the first stanza, not sure I'd be able to explain why though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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