Ozymandias Posted October 15, 2006 Report Share Posted October 15, 2006 What I thoroughly enjoyed about this piece was how fluidly Z and Yui-chan's writing mixed together. The change in voice was just enough to delineate the two different character personalities without breaking the sense that they were telling two separate pieces of the same story. The only thing I didn't like was that I was left feeling like this story had no resolution. Rather like the plot of the whole piece would read "The Dreamer's realm suddenly manifesting a portal to our realm in the hallway, Yui enters seeking answers to the riddle that is the Dreamer. After she talks one out of him, the Dreamer-" You know what I mean? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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