madhatter Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 (edited) Mazrim/madhatterPeriod 4 Bio test is long and tiringVoices drone on and boringEnd of sighingPencils scratch on faded pen inkStudents continue smelling stinkDissect in sinkChemicals in big beakers boilTest and examine substance in foilDrops of some oilBio test is long and tiringVoices drone on and boringEnd of sighing *Was absent, did not get worksheetWas not in purple trayOOC: As assignment in English class for trochaic rhyme. Sigh, I know its bad enough I'm posting up an assignment but whats worse is that I slacked off and wrote it in literally 15 minutes during my biology class . Hence the bio theme. *cringes- so I'm not quite sure how good my trochaic rhyme is, its a little hard under the time constraints* Oh and the bottom * was scrawled in messy handwriting - a note to my teacher But I still look forward to comments. And please if you can spot if my trochaic was messed up, please let me know, and if its fine, let me know too Oh and I forgot to make a subtitle that I'm buying off my Weenie status... Edited May 2, 2006 by madhatter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted May 2, 2006 Report Share Posted May 2, 2006 heh, reminds me of some of Alaeha's assignments, done literally at the last minute and often better than most of what was turned in by the class. Will have to brush up on my rhyme schemes and be a little more alert before giving this a look-through for technical details, but wanted to note both my amused agreement with the subject matter AND that I edited the subtitle for you so hopefully Gyr will see it and fix that for you. =) glad to see you back about! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
madhatter Posted May 3, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 Thanks so much Ayshela And its great to be back! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted May 3, 2006 Report Share Posted May 3, 2006 Thanks for waiting patiently, madhatter. First of all, congratulations on losing a slight sense of being a hotdog - your weenie award is no more. Not bad at all, madhatter, and good to see you back with us. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
madhatter Posted May 4, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2006 Thanks Gyr! I never did like getting stuck between two buns Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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