Tasslehoff Posted April 11, 2006 Report Share Posted April 11, 2006 Im missing you when you are not near. This "forever" still brings the slightest tear. I long to hear your voice whispering in my ears. By far the sweetest music I've ever heard. Still to this day, they wait to hear the chords again. Softly; I do love you.. Ive come to believe saying "Good Bye" means, forever. So in the poem, when I say " This forever", Im reffering to when she said goodbye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetcherrie Posted April 12, 2006 Report Share Posted April 12, 2006 Funny the first time, and second time I read it, it felt as if the person had died, and you were saying goodbye to this person. I like the err...not sure how to call it, but in rhyme? Oh well, I like how it rhymes within the sentence. Thank you for posting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tasslehoff Posted April 13, 2006 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2006 I also like how I was able to rhyme, but a bit disapointed I couldnt finish it so. *ponders* Thanks for the comment though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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