Mira Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 Sorry, this one's a little silly and not all that good, but I was bored on my lunch today. I have no room for waste or errorMy words they must be terseWriting on napkins I fearHas proved to be a dreadful curseAnd even though its just begunThis poem has reached its endPunctuated by a ketchup stainI once had called my friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetcherrie Posted February 22, 2006 Report Share Posted February 22, 2006 *giggles* I think it's pretty cool actually A bit lighter than what I normally read of you, but I can definitely appreciate sillyness like this. The only word that feels really out of place and stops me while reading is 'dreadful' Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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