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Marbles


Sweetcherrie

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Two marbles in my hand

One black, one white

 

No way to go

No way to know

What is wrong

And what is right

 

Two marbles in my hand

One love, one truth

 

Two ways to go

One way to know

What is day

And what is night

 

Two marbles in my hand

One me, one you

 

Which way to go

Do I want to know

Which is friend

And which is foe?

 

Two marbles in my hand

 

Only two

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i love this.

 

two paths, held in the hand as marbles, each a globe, a world that could be if chosen,

 

i love this a lot,

 

 

the simple choice and the perils of not knowing the right choice, hoping you are right, fearing you are not.

 

 

simply put, wonderfully written.

 

thank you

 

:raven:

Edited by cryptomancer
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*echo's crypto's words*

 

I like this a lot, not only because it's in a style that I prefer to use myself, but because of the images it uses, and the simplicity yet deepness within it.

 

Very, very well done, and thank you for posting.

 

Incidentally, this is something that I would like to see in print, on a poster.. it would work :)

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