Mira Posted October 18, 2005 Report Share Posted October 18, 2005 The Soldier Remains the Same the bands play a marching tune and the flags fly in the breezes the anthems cut through the air and every breath freezes even though the notes often differ and its called by a different name regardless of the song the soldier remains the same the tools of death grow larger and more powerful every year the battle evolves to combat the current fear and though the land that is fought over to which the nations lay claim is scarred beyond recollection the soldier remains the same he's young and he's old he's meak and he's bold he fights for a cause; more precious than gold and holds his head high even when lamed war 's ever changing but the soldier remains the same I'm blaming Peredhil for this one, since his talk of retirement from the Military sort of inspired me. The whole poem is his if he'll take it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted October 18, 2005 Report Share Posted October 18, 2005 This poem strikes a cord with me as my husband is in the reserves. I read it to him. Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Regel Posted October 19, 2005 Report Share Posted October 19, 2005 (edited) It's often a person's belief that gives him the reason to wear the uniform. In some ways the sadness I read in this poem suggests that the reasons remain the same. Nicely worded poem Mira. Edited October 19, 2005 by Regel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted October 19, 2005 Report Share Posted October 19, 2005 (edited) you forgot complaining, all soldier complain no matter what situation they're in... When the complaining stops, starting looking for the knives... Also most soldiers start out with such high ideals coming out basic training... "Brain washing," may be too strong of a word (well unless you join the cult of the marine corp,) but there is definetly a great amount of ethusasim there from the trainee's. Well for the first month or so. Then reality sets in of just how far your actual unit's climate/culture is from those high ideals your recruiter sold you on. And there is also that sense of vertigo you get from being lost in a bureaucratic "system" where the unscrupulous and mediocre flourish and the honorable are driven out by backstabbers and general revulsion... I.e. you can't believe they let these @$@#$ idiots get to have near absolute power over your life. And as with any idealist that gets his heart broken they then turn into a cynics... They will usually remain this way, until some great shining light usually in the form of a great leader/friend/mentor/event comes into their life, and shows them the righteous path towards competent leadership. Or through they own observations of the great woe's about them, they'll have an epiphany or defining moment which gives them the resolve to "go on" despite all the @#$#@ $##!# stuff that goes on around them. They even may themselves strive to become leaders, so as to pass on this great sense of responsibility and honor that has been given them. Of course they are in the minority. The majority that do wish to get promoted do so out want of to two things: power or money. They generally look on passing the requirments to promotion as things that should be circumvented whenever possible. E.G. going to college mills to get their degrees, sharing answers from past exams/papers from said mills. Sharing exams/answers on military education courses... Outright lying on their evaluation reports. Getting they buddies to look the other way when they can't pass their weight limit. And let us not forgot all the mini-cover ups that go on. Ranging from Sexual harassment, various arrests usually involving alcohol/drugs, Sponsal abuse, incompetance (yep they cover that up too. Reason? they don't want to hurt his/her career with a bad report.) Like in any other profession, it pays to have friends in high places... And the military is in the business of keeping people in, not kicking them out. So in summary, the Doctirine of "Getting by" or "Getting Over" prevails. But all and all I liked your poem and felt is a noble piece. Though, I suggest the reason that the ethernal soldier fight's is this: For whatever reason, and there are many: someone tells him he has too. rev... Edited October 19, 2005 by reverie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mira Posted October 24, 2005 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2005 Thanks for the comments guys (and gal). The feedback is always appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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