Cyril Darkcloud Posted August 23, 2005 Report Share Posted August 23, 2005 (edited) When reverie was organizing his quill quest I made the offer of a multi-part piece of critical feedback for the winner. Unfortunately life reverted into one of its intensely busy cycles for me at about the time the Slamquest was reaching its conclusion. I’ve only just managed to work enough free time into my schedule to begin composition of the promised prize - hopefully it will do full justice to Mira’s fine work as the winning poet.As it has been a while since Mira’s winning entries were posted in the Slamquest thread I’d encourage anyone reading this to check them out in their original setting before reading my own comments upon them. To facilitate this I’ll link to the poems tonight in this post and put up the first installment of my promised feedback tomorrow.Mira’s first poem, titled Daedalus’ Son can be found on the second page of the Slamquest.His second poem, apparently untitled, is located on the fourth page of the Slamquest.Mira and reverie, my apologies for the delay in getting this done. Edited June 14, 2014 by Tanuchan broken links Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted August 23, 2005 Report Share Posted August 23, 2005 Hey, no problem... We had to save the best for last ya know... rev... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salinye Posted August 24, 2005 Report Share Posted August 24, 2005 It's my personal opinion that feedback from Cyril is WELL worth waiting for. ~Salinye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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