Gryphon Posted February 7, 2005 Report Share Posted February 7, 2005 Fire in the sky, Burning the clouds, Electric orange, As the sun kisses, The clouds goodbye, Bringing to a close, Another day missing you. ~~~ If I cannot hold you in my arms, Then I shall hold you in my heart. Forever. *** I always feel I'm not good at writing poetry, or even quasi-poetry, but hopefully this isn't too bad an offering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetcherrie Posted February 7, 2005 Report Share Posted February 7, 2005 I can almost see the sky, your description is very good. It makes me feel longing for that special person. I like it. *hugs* - Sweetcherrie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gryphon Posted February 8, 2005 Author Report Share Posted February 8, 2005 Thankyou, I do miss her... so close now, 3 days and she'll be back with me. ~~~ One call from you, The other day, Just stole from me, My breath away, I closed my eyes, And saw you there, Reached out a hand, Stroked your hair, Alas my dream, Vanished away, Can't wait my love, 'Til you're back, To stay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted February 8, 2005 Report Share Posted February 8, 2005 I like the second one best... it sux missing people you love, but is nice to have people worth missing too... rev... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gryphon Posted February 10, 2005 Author Report Share Posted February 10, 2005 I feel a need, To run and shout, And tell the world, What love's about. I've had love, I set her free, Now my love's, Come back to me. She's back, she's back, I want to cry, Shout to the world, Shout to the sky. Instead I hold it, Deep in my heart, The way I feel now, Is just the start! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Equester Posted February 10, 2005 Report Share Posted February 10, 2005 I'm glad you put these three in the same topic...it makes each individual poem seem somehow more. The third one definatly seemed the easier to read, for me at least. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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