Zariah Posted December 16, 2004 Report Share Posted December 16, 2004 Sometimes (Only sometimes) Do I feel an Empty Longing… A longing to be free: ….from Expectation ...from Obligation ...from Temptation ….from Evaluation. I can try every day (well almost) With sincere Intention To fill my heart: ….with Interaction ….with Relaxation ….with Calm reaction ….with Satisfaction. If I can learn Through experience And find my own way…. I can finally: ....have self-fulfillment ….have decisiveness ….have courage ….have enjoyment in my life. And my journey can lead me onward. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Death of Rats Posted December 16, 2004 Report Share Posted December 16, 2004 *claps softly, toebones clicking somewhat* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted December 17, 2004 Report Share Posted December 17, 2004 ah... i love the use of parathesees in the 1st and 3rd stanza... it's personalizes it and gives it depth... i think... like a sketch artistest discovering how to shade for the first time... cool. revery the dreamlost "inverness" the dream continues... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nyyark Posted December 17, 2004 Report Share Posted December 17, 2004 You nailed it Rev, thats the same feeling I got from it. Awsome job Zariah! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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