jonathan_wolfe Posted July 12, 2004 Report Share Posted July 12, 2004 Snap your fingers, grind the strings hit the drums, thump the beat waggle the refrain, shrill the chorus hit the drums, beat the thumper determination, resolution, steadfastness confidence. strings and cellos and violins, growling fading quiet next track. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xaious, Master of Time Posted July 12, 2004 Report Share Posted July 12, 2004 ..Interesting. Not sure I've ever heard 'grind the strings' before, but it works. ..'waggle the refrain'...? That one sounds a bit odd.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crichon Posted July 13, 2004 Report Share Posted July 13, 2004 This is a really cool poem. I love the freeform beat. Very descriptive, I could just hear the instruments being played. Thanks for a great read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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