cryptomancer Posted July 7, 2004 Report Share Posted July 7, 2004 The moon, half waxed hid amidst the shifting fabric of the misted clouds. The night chill formed my breath upon its grasp. I searched; looking to the shadowed traces of daylight’s hidden shades, Looking for the form that in the dreams of my mind I long to embrace. Living in my world, insubstantial as my dreams, yet Real in the love we share and the touch of her hand upon my cheek. I hold her and touch the softness of beauty, Caress one who in her existence describes The very truth, that beauty exists to be seen, held, touched. Caressed in the mind of a dreamer, and loved In the words of a poet, watching and loving the Vision that inspires his tongue to dance with the joy of his gift. The night, young as the touch of beauty under the caress Of my fingertips, and the embrace of her arms. Night, the safe haven of the dreams I dare to envision. I long for the night, and the paths in the solitude of its embrace. I seek the shadows and the shelter of the cool air in my lungs. And in the caress of the night’s breath, and the soft falling of dew I find her touch and hold her in my arms again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salinye Posted July 7, 2004 Report Share Posted July 7, 2004 Well, this is quite beautiful. I love the flow of it. I love the way you weave your words. I am a true romantic at heart, and although I am unqualified to critique it from a technical standpoint, I can tell you from a readers standpoint that it's wonderful. :0) Thank you for sharing, Raven. ~Salinye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted July 10, 2004 Report Share Posted July 10, 2004 Aww its so sweet! I love the way the structure of it and the way it flowed beautifully!*big hugs* welcome to the pen sweety hope to hear more from you!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cryptomancer Posted July 11, 2004 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2004 Thank you! I am glad it is liked. thanks also for the welcome *grins* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cryptomancer Posted July 11, 2004 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2004 Upon the dawning of the stars, and the misting of dew, I sense the changes to the day grow weak, and the night’s strength renew. Hidden in the moonlit clouds, haloed in the stars, I see the beauty Possessed by the things I hold dearest in the world I created for my life. I walk the paths of my gardens, and in the sprinkling of wishes Water the dreams of life to grow into the reality that is me. All I find in the walls of my isolation, and the paradise of my life I placed there for a reason, and all I have been given Causes them to grow, with the desire of my heart and soul. I am blest with the skill to tell of beauty, and the way That in the world it is seen, so incomplete, but hopes remain, For it is still seen, and enjoyed, and the few who see it complete Can tell of its path through their lives and the wonder of its caress In the world they make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cryptomancer Posted July 11, 2004 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2004 Have you seen the dawn in the eyes of one you love? Have you seen the reflected rays of the sun, shining from The resting place of feelings so deep? Through the eyes of the one who holds your heart to theirs, And accepts that you are all you show them. For they chose to see all you offered, and loved you still. In the light of the early morning, and the twilight You can look into the eyes of love, seeing the angelic beauty That caresses the existence of all, and the wings of Love’s healing, mending the lonely flaws of our soul. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cryptomancer Posted July 11, 2004 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2004 Look into the eyes of the one who can see All the beauty that you can be, and love the brilliance And the flaws, they create in their combining. For the eyes reflect the love they see, And the love that binds together all, is the beauty That is given to me, as from the eyes of my love I stare back and see all the beauty that is me. For in the eyes of love I see, that which in me Is loved. And treasure the knowledge it brings. For the love I have strengthens me to be all I am, And all I shall become. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted July 18, 2004 Report Share Posted July 18, 2004 so i'm guessing your in love then? its very cute! I love your poems i wish i could write happy love poems! Guess ill stick to what im good at though if i remember what that is! Your extremly talented and creative i love your work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cryptomancer Posted July 19, 2004 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2004 Yes, I am in love. My thanks for liking my scribblings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mynx Posted July 19, 2004 Report Share Posted July 19, 2004 I don't know why I'm posting here, you already know that I love your so called scribblings Crypt. But, as always, I feel compelled to remind you just how beautiful they are. Damn you for being too damn good at this! "Victory will yet be mine!" *stops and notices gethering crowd* eh heh heh heh...hi? *disappears in a flash of smoke* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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