BlackCagedHeart Posted May 3, 2004 Report Share Posted May 3, 2004 Ay, it's been a while since I posted..... Wonder if I still have my ways with words....? Anyways......This is my 1st try at this kind of rythm scheme, so please....I am weary. Chaotic (more parts to arrive) A strong feeling from my heart which it came It amerged from the depths like a piercing black flame Out of my body, into mind it had crept Leaving behind it both madnesss and death Piercing their bodies and minds none the less Thinking they're crazy and wishing for sense Jesus won't save you from whom that destroys Snapping your bodies like old and worn toys It screams like a banshee; is covered in blood Ripping your insides and licking your guts He came to ME looking for a place to stay He said he'd keep all of the bad things away I listened to the beast in hopes for the best But all I'd been given was chaos but yet.... I felt of it best BlackCagedHeart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X-Sabre Posted May 11, 2004 Report Share Posted May 11, 2004 wow it made me think hehehe great poem. keep up good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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