Oldfox Posted April 18, 2004 Report Share Posted April 18, 2004 Here's a really short poem that i wrote during a late night of drinking... Avalanche I guess I didn't know that you were an avalanche, when I stepped into you. Muffled sounds of destruction as you covered me up until I couldnt move. And it felt good, not freezing to death. but to slowly suffocate. from you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HopperWolf Posted April 20, 2004 Report Share Posted April 20, 2004 strikes me as remarkably good lyric material, especially the first stanza. Like the phrasing. nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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