WrenWind Posted March 2, 2004 Report Share Posted March 2, 2004 Cut to the chase slow down, take your time Pick up the pace Enjoy the smell of the roses This is a race Take it easy, make it rhyme Fallen from grace I will catch you, dont be afraid You will lose face What others think is not important Just wasting space Remember you are loved A new one comes to take your place You cannot be replaced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X-Sabre Posted March 4, 2004 Report Share Posted March 4, 2004 Awesome poem Wren. I loved the contrast between what I assume would be the conscience(rational) and subconscience(emotional). Not sure if which set of words I want to use. lol Excellent way to work it into poem. Your rational mind says one thing, but the emotional mind says another. I know I've found myself doing the same thing in my head. Thanks for conveying it so well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted March 6, 2004 Author Report Share Posted March 6, 2004 Voices in my head I don't think I can you have to He will be hurt He is already in pain My heart will break It has long been shattered I feel like crying There will be time for that later I have to do this I will be waiting Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted March 6, 2004 Report Share Posted March 6, 2004 *nods* sounds like many of the arguments within my head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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