Vlad Posted February 25, 2004 Report Share Posted February 25, 2004 Why must you run From the truth I hold dear, When simply escaping Doesn't diminish the fear. What have I done To not let you be near- My memory chasing A long-forgotten tear. If honesty shows Itself in this light, Then I will have chose To stay with my soul. You are the truth Which is always right. You are the answers, Which I so admire- Like delicatre dancers Atop a glamarous spire. But be without you, I can't- You being the one Who inspired this rant. Truth is bliss, and so is love And it is you, that I dream of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
X-Sabre Posted February 25, 2004 Report Share Posted February 25, 2004 Great idea for a poem. A bit sappy for my tastes, but eh, what can I say. I like the diminishing line from each stanza, draws you closer to end. Adds a good flow to the poem. Glad I was able to help with that last line for ya. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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