Mira Posted December 5, 2003 Report Share Posted December 5, 2003 (edited) Silently Silently a river flows I test its waters with my toes It’s a cutting, piercing, burning cold But in its depths dreams are sold The kind that can't be bought with gold The kind you grasp and try to hold But slip between your finger tips And lightly brush against your lips Time and Age your endless foes With heavy heart I let them go Edited December 5, 2003 by Mira Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted December 5, 2003 Report Share Posted December 5, 2003 Oh i love this poem its so cool!!!!!!! Its really really cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yatsuna13 Posted December 7, 2003 Report Share Posted December 7, 2003 beautiful...i love the detail and the way the words flow together...i love all of your poems and hope some day to be as good as many f the people on this sight...gives me something to live for...*smiles* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuki Kokoro Posted December 7, 2003 Report Share Posted December 7, 2003 Very nice poem, you did a good job with the imagery. Not sure I understood it, especially the last two lines, but I enjoyed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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