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Talk Of Life

 

Note: i wrote this duriong a RE class

 

Talk of love

Talk of hate

Talk of death

Talk of fate

Talk of things

That are yet to be

Talk of you

Talk of me

Talk of loss

Talk of sadness

Talk of suicide

Talk of madness

Talk of my death

Talk of yours,

Talk of fighting

Talk of cause

Talk of love

Talk of hate

Talk of destiny

Talk of fate

 

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This is very much a talk of life, a lot of very meaningful subjects are mentioned, you could turn each line into a poem all by itself.

 

The "love, hate, death, fate" at the beginning versus the "love, hate, destiny, fate" at the end was an interesting choice. Purposeful? Or did it just turn out that way?

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I talk of talk

I talk of walk

I talk of chalk

I talk of stock

 

I talk of ears

I talk of years

I talk of cheers

I talk of jeers

 

I talk of suspense

I talk of two cents

I talk of repents

I talk of nonsense

 

I talk of good

I talk of wood

I talk of should

I talk of food

 

I talk of red

I talk of dead

I talk of shed

I talk of bread

 

I talk of nothing

I talk of something

I talk of anything

I talk of everything

 

All in all, I just talk...

 

A good poem indeed. I just had to write a bunch of nothing as well. A rather enjoyable piece, and somethign that oddly enough makes sense in some way that my brain cannot quite grasp in all of its simplistic complexity... I just wrote a review that I don't even know what it means...

 

Good poem. >^_^<

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Wow cool poem ah this is what i do in RE class too the many poems that teacher has torn up on me i will never forget! :) Its such a boring class well with my teacher ugh! hehehehe anyway this is a really cool poem i love the struture of it and everything i just love it well done and Damon Inferel i really like your poem too :)

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