whynotsin Posted November 21, 2003 Report Share Posted November 21, 2003 Alone and Away Here she is the doll of the ball. Holding the hem in hand. She stared at a man not to far of, Dreaming about his hands, Undoing the lace, that held her bodice in place. Sinnful dreams of lonely girl. Standing in place, holding herself. Her chests rise and fall with each breath. A prince looms close by. His breath inches from her left. She can feel his skin pressed against hers, She can taste salty sweet lips. Here the Ball and it's dolls, hansome and dashing men of honor ravashing beautyful dangers curves. Lips that shine, Hips that sway. Slow and fast the tempo all night Emotions and ungodly acts. Men and Women disregrading marriage vows, laying next to other wed men. The last note played. The dancers disperse. To chambers not there own. Some in pairs some in bunch, and still others in hordes to the rooms. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peredhil Posted November 21, 2003 Report Share Posted November 21, 2003 cleverly done. Makes a mental note to avoid such situations... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whynotsin Posted November 23, 2003 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2003 Clever double triple speak, words cloaked in the very shadows they illuminate. One word often meaning two. thanks, I wrote it in the moment, I wanted to have a more inocent potrayle of a girl watch the worl go by but the poem took over. o and sorry for all of my (sp) errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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