Appy Posted November 4, 2003 Report Share Posted November 4, 2003 (edited) 4am IOrange light on empty roadsA drizzle cleans the streetIt is the time, the moment which bodesA transition that wise men heedWindow onto other livesThoughts being unfurledDreams in which the memory thrivesFutures prowl and lureEldritch is the 4amStill cities have their wayGhost hour in the modern jamThat is here to stay [3/4 november 2003, Leverkusen] 4am IIOrange lightonempty, wet roadsSilvery lightondripping leavesSilence deepenspenetratingTimecloses inA windowopensFutures awaitprowling under the stillYou choosewhichto followIt's magic hour [3/4 november 2003, Leverkusen] Edited October 20, 2014 by Appy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkPainInside Posted November 5, 2003 Report Share Posted November 5, 2003 .........HuGz!............ Thats magical.. wow! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalypso Posted November 5, 2003 Report Share Posted November 5, 2003 Nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted November 8, 2003 Report Share Posted November 8, 2003 o wow its really cool i love the second one but the first one is not without its charm! Its great appy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Illianna Wolfsong Posted November 8, 2003 Report Share Posted November 8, 2003 (edited) Very nice Appy. If you don't mind me grabbing excepts, there were several phrases that painted particularly captivating images: Ghost hour in the modern jam Silvery light on dripping leaves Futures await prowling under the still I enjoy your imagery and the lyrical tongue with which you create it. -Illi Edited November 8, 2003 by Illianna Wolfsong Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appy Posted November 8, 2003 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2003 Thank you all *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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