Zepheri

things look really nice. its like...the old pen but with new ink and cover. it fits

Of course I'm still in...A demon never goes back on her word.

Haha! No alternative interpretation at the moment, but I just wanted to say that I thought this "Green Eggs and Ham" continuation was cool. :-) I like how you derailed the story and took it in the direction of over-the-top morbidity, and appreciated the various Seuss-ian references (poor cat in the hat!).

 

Your continuation also reveals the true moral of the story: if your cooked ham turns out green, it's probably a good idea to either throw it out or test it on Aardvark first.

Thank you for your comment ^_________________^ *hug*

*giggle* that's funny, and so very true ^__________^

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I would like to try it out... I don't know all of you, and you don't me, but I thik it will be fun. Do you think it would be helpful if we gave a bit of info on our selfs first Sweetcherrie? That way we can help out with the writing.... just a thought...

I would like to sign in with my character Zepheri... if that is ok...

WOW!!!! That's so ture. I agree with everything you said. One should never just settle for someone, they should be with that person becuase they love them. I do hope you can find the girl that makes you want to run through a storm or fight an evil dragon for. Becuase I know that if you do that, then this girl is turly for you.

It's nice to see you post something my friend, how about giving me a call? We haven't talked in forever!!!!

<3 u ^_________^

Wow!!! That's so sweet.

Is this poem for someone or did you just write it?

I personally would like to see this poem with more written, then again short, sweet and to the point is sometimes the best approach. Good job

OMG!!!! Such a twist on things I like it very much so!!! Is Max good or evil? We may never know!!! And who is that kid that walked in there? How does he know everything? I wish to read more!!! I wish to know!!! You are doing a wonderful job my friend, please keep up the good work, my mind is going crazy with questions that need to be answered!!! ^_____________^

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O_O....I didn't even know!!!! WOW, I FELL LOVED ^______________________^

Thank you *glomps all those around her* I'm soooooooo happy!!!!!

thanks everyone for the feedback and the suggestions. i shall take them into consideration. This is one of the only stories i have stuck to with writing so naturally i want it to come out well. thanks again and more is on the way

More better be on the way!!!! or else.....I'm not sure what else at the time, but I'll get back to you on that.

WOW, this is a great song. There is a lot of meaning behind it. It brings back a lot of my own childhood.

This part here reminds me of the fact that I'm always having to move every three years, I've lived in a lot of places in my short life.

I live in southern France

I'm from a Texas ranch

I come from Mecca and Peru

I live across the street

In the mountains, on a beach

I come from everywhere

And my name is you

This part here i think any one could relate too, I at first liked to climb trees, but now I love to read and sometimes wacth TV.

I like to run and climb

I like to sit and read

I like to watch my TV, too

Thanks for sharing this with us, I really like it. Are there memories that come back when you here this song?

I've read this before and as always I love your work. I'm not sure what to say then what I have already told you before. I still love this and I really want to read more of it, and I want you to finish it!!! I really want to know what happens...so get to writing!!!!

Absolutely NO problem, my dear. I hope it comes of some use to you.

And yes...Poe rocks.

 

Like I said, post more! You're a fantastic writer!

 

-Fae

Thank you Fae . I think I'm an okay writer, I still need more work. If you want to read more, I posted a story (Dragon Stones.) on here, perhaps, if you want too, you can take a look.

wow, this poem is sooo cute and I do beleive you will make it far one day Good job, keep it up.

To: NightFae and Dros

Thank you both for your advice. I'm glad you like my work. I will look out for your stories, poems, what have you as well.

I also love Poe. I can relate to Poe in the fact that all of his works are sad, or horror stories. That is mostly what I right, along with fantasy.

Once again thank you both.

Thank you for your help on this. I understand everything now and can see how you go those ideas. I think I was trying to use archaic vioce in the one poem, as far as active/passive vioce I wasn't intending on either, it just happened. But once agan thank you for your help.

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To: reverie

Thank you for you comments. It is always nice to get feedback. A few questions for you though.

1) what is active voice?

2) what is archaic?

I hate commas and what not, it's nice to know that I'm not the only one with this problem. I do understand what you mean, I should break-up the "I remember it" parts, it is much easier to read that way. Yes, I did not expect people to ge the poem and it is just for me, but i wanted to let people know that before hand, just incase they wanted to know; to save time on asking.