Kayleana

Well done poem. I really liked it. Nice. Kayleana

I really like that! it's good! Kayleana

That is really well done. I know that feeling, that the poem represts it really well. ~Kayleana

I do not know you, but Happy Birthday! I hope it's a good one! ~Kayleana

that's so cute!! I really like it! hehe ~Kayleana~

I always found this poem of mine a little annouying So tell me what you think of it. ~~~~~~~~ A Watery Cave Water shimmering, On the silver walls. Water dripping, Off the sliver walls. The sound of water, Hitting the silver walls. It is amazing, Seeing the silver walls. But it’s just a watery cave, With silver walls. What a gorgeous sight, Everything white from the mist. Little rainbows, Made by the mist. Cool drops of water, From the mist. The fresh smell around me, Created by the mist. Kisses kissing me all over, Coming from the mist. I wish to be no were else, But this watery cave. Everything is so peaceful, In the watery cave. So many people love it, Here in the watery cave. Seeing the silver walls and mist, It’s all just beginning in the watery cave. But no one ever stays, For it is just a watery cave.

I haven't written like this in a while, so i might be a bit rusty ... So bare with me while I get back into the mood of writing. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Pushing open the doors, a dark cloaked figures walks in. She brings her head up slowly; water dripping off the top of her cloak to the ground. She looks around. "Tis a dreary day out there. Haven't seen one like it for a good half of a month." The young woman takes off her cloak and hangs it nears the fire to dry. She then moves over to the bar. Squeezing the water out of her long black hair, she looks down at her dark green dress which was drench with water as well. "Give me something to warm my soul, good man! The water has seem to soaked right through my cloak! Maybe it be a good time for me to a new one, eh?" Taking a sip of her drink, the young woman walks back over to the fire and finds a seat. Looking around the room again, the woman realizes that she does not recongize anyone, nor do they know her. A little laugh rolls off of her lips. "My sincere apologies!! I haven't introduced myself! I'm just chatting away as I always do. Well I am Kayleana. I've seen this a place many times, but have never dropped in ... So I just thought that right now was as good as time as any to actually come in."