Cheyenne
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ya know the only thing I don't like about this poem? Now I can't get it out of my head...reminds me of the 80's don't worry be happy song....
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I guess that makes me weak as well. Very well written, I enjoyed it immensley (sp?)
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This started out as a roller coaster thingy...It didn't end up that way....ah well, back to the drawing board....
Up the hill we went so fast
Flying like the wind we were
I screamed as you we passed
To me it was all a blur
I couldn’t catch my breath
And didn’t want it to end
As at the bottom of the cliff was death
Waiting for my soul to bend
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True love...an everyday struggle, one with ups and downs, despair and joy...never an easy road to follow, but one well worth the trouble. Very nicely done!
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OH! I really liked this. It flowed so smoothly that it took me reading others replys to see all you had really done with this. I might add though, just as there is a fine line between love and hate so to is there one between despair and joy. It may seem easy for another to say but believe me, despair can be vanquished with the correct sword. Don't give up. You're a very talented writter.
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How very interesting. I didn't see the end until it hit me in the face. very nicely done!
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It reminds me of AM, SoB, and the military all at once. I tried for so long to hold onto those friendships. I guess the saying is true
"Friends come and go, but enemies accumulate" It is a well written poem. I enjoyed it.
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It was at one time. Thank you for the comfort, You are all such wonderful people here. Actually though, now that I am more at peace with myself I was finally able to post that one. It was written a couple years ago and I kept it taped to the screen of my computer at work. It helped me remember, to always try to see past my own selfish feeling, wants and needs and see everyones point of view.
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A dying flame
Of flickering blue light
Illuminating my soul
Bringing forth my plight
Losing faith in above
Wondering at God's grand scheme
I no longer see the big picture
I am lost in this dream...
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My Father
I heard you whisper my name in the night
I came to slowly but oh what a sight
Standing before me in glistening moonlight
My dear friend, my father, beckoned me
How did this miracle come to be?
I was blind so how could I see
Something so perfect and heavenly
Appearing before me so naturally
I reached out to him haltingly
He took my hand lovingly
Pulling me close and tenderly
He whispered “Good-bye”
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I saw your face in a window yesterday
Walking to the other side, no one was there
I heard your voice in the hall last night
Looking up there was just silence around me
I had a thought that you needed me
But it was fleeting and never quite stayed around
I felt your presence and knew I was loved
Yet I turned away as life would not let me be
I had fires to put out and rooms to clean
My life was in shambles or so it would seem
The kids wouldn’t listen I was all by myself
The world was at war and the job never stops
Then a soft little whisper from a friend far away
Sheds light on the hope of a new kind of way
You know what it is; you have been there before
You can recall the soft warmth that enveloped us all
It has missed you my friend, as have I.
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Brute, you are forever in my prayers and thoughts. Hope all is well with you and yours.
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Another one as yet untitled so I thought I would just group them together....
To smile when you hear a child cry
To taste their blood and feel alive
Is to tear a hole in the fabric of time
To steal a life so alike to mine
One day you will feel the fire
Of our Gods wrath and fateful ire
One day you will pay the price
For making a child your one true vice
All they want is your love and trust
How sad indeed all you have is lust
Burning not just in your heart but mind
To weaken others with your scheming crime