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Would they notice
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If the dishes were done
the laundry clean ,folded and put away
the dog walked
the floors washed
the booboo kissed
lunches made
a warm body in the bed
Would they notice
the glass that was missing
the fist of wrinkles in one shirt
the broken glass in the garbage
my bandaged hand
the tears on the pillow
Maybe they will when i'm gone
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Tender moments
over time and space we collect them
moments in time that are frozen in our memmories
a smile, a tear a sweet note
an eyelash brushed softly off a sleeping cheek
"I love you" whispered in the dark
little things remembered and stored
babies laughter
infectious bubbling wonderful
silly cartoons shared with a child
gather them, savour them
hold them close to your heart
these moments are what life is all about
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Wind and storms are powerful things to many of us I found this among things I wrote about a year ago hope you like it.
Storm
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In the storm we are born.
From it we emerge.
Live in peace at its center for a short time.
Then to the storm we return.
For only there are we truly alive.
When the storm passes so will we.
To return on the next winds of fury.
Wren
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I wish i could paint the picture that this poem fills my head with "Thank you for the post "
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On The Cliff
Standing on the edge of the cliff the wind of the incoming storm coating her in salt spray from the bay below her eyes closed in consentration oblivious to her soak through dress. Her arm rise slowly seemingly pulling the storm closer to shore
behind her at the edge of a forest a man stand motionless watching her.
i wrote this little snippet 06/06/03
the beginning of a story yet unwriten
Wren
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Well done ...This one hits a nerve too close to home
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*Reads it again with a smile in rememberance of time long past *
Lovely sentiment and well done .
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On Sorrow
So intence it is felt
That hollow in the heart
even felt as a physical hole in your gut
but it forces you to look inward
to find out
that only you can pull yourself out and
to see the love that there is out there for you
and the sorrow you felt for the loss of one
make the next even more special
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Spitit of a Different Kind
The hair on the back of my neck rises, the room feels soo cold. In the air a mist begins to weave and sway taking a loosely human form. I don't move or react for I have called this spirit to make amends. I hope. Even if it takes my life. The cost of the summons is great; my blood flows from sliced wrists onto a totem. The Spirit flows closer until it touches me. An icy cold fills me, surrounds me yet I feel no malice here. The guilt I feel was not mine to carry. No forgiveness is required. Spirit kissed, I lay on the floor in a pool of my offering and live to tell the tale.
Wren
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Cool idea
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I don't figure i will ever win but i like the way this particular contest makes you work with a specific set of words and limited number ..... a little brainwork each day i know about the other bit as i got the same thing about the conference and stuff .
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Poetry in Motion ...they give you a selection of words and ask you to use up to 20 of them to create a poem 100$/day is awarded .. it is a cool exersize
This is what i came up with today
soft wind remembers love
laugh again
night falls
kiss desire
salty tear
everything fogs
heart holds love forever
Wren
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Have a very Happy Birthday
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What Poetry Form Are You?I'm terza rima, and I talk and smile.
Where others lock their rhymes and thoughts away
I let mine out, and chatter all the while.
I'm rarely on my own - a wasted day
Is any day that's spent without a friend,
With nothing much to do or hear or say.
I like to be with people, and depend
On company for being entertained;
Which seems a good solution, in the end.
or i am
What Poetry Form Are You?I am heroic couplets; most precise
And fond of order. Planned and structured. Nice.
I know, of course, just what I want; I know,
As well, what I will do to make it so.
This doesn't mean that I attempt to shun
Excitement, entertainment, pleasure, fun;
But they must keep their place, like all the rest;
They might be good, but ordered life is best.
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Thank you
My mother tongue is english .
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*waits with baited breath for the next post *
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I can do that now i didn't know there was such a place till today.
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last stitch and the sweater is done made to fit a lizzard type person tucks it all in a package and leaves it on the desk after her stange interview/sales pitch then. "Thank you " then strides out of the room leaving the youth serum behind and goes to find a good tall mug of meade.
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Finishes a scarf and mittens ...... brushes off the cobwebs beginning to form on her skirts "Hmmmm" Looks around and see the que has not moved,pulls out a new colour and starts on a sweater
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*laughs* I'm not 11 ... I wish
: this refers to an article read when I was 11
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I spew things into notepad then copy paste
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Lies
This is in its "not quite sure what i was thinking" state but figured it might benifit from being pulled apart. Have at it!!
Lies all lies
Every day I say I love you
lies
It's not that I don't care
I do
Love on the other hand
no
not the love you feel for me
Lies all lies
if I live it long enough will it be different?
I doubt
some day it will all catch up to me
Lies all the lies
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This was written a few months ago and almost forgotten untill i read Dollar/China so i dragged it out .
China Doll
taken home
adored for a time
set on a shelf
safe from being broken
over time
forgotten
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Thanks Yui *fixed*
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Frozen
emotional frost covers my heart
i still love but there is no passion i'm not even sure what that is
somewhere along the way i have lost something vital, making all that i feel only echos of what they should be
controlled emotion everything wrapped in layers of rational thought ....
remembering a passage read as a child about why people cry
for pity
for happiness
for physical pain
but mostly because we feel sorry for ourselves
i doubt the author realized the impact his article would have on an 11 year old girl
it made me analyze every tear
now they are frozen along with the passion he forgot to include
Wren
Happy Birthday Justin Silverblade
in Cabaret Room Archives
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Happy B-Day *bakes a cake and lights the candles * enjoy your day