reverie

oh wait you wouldn't be refering to the "two towers" by chance... if you are... kewl... if not... it's still kewl...

 

revery

the dreamlost

"to bounce is fun, so bounce"

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Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

um... i have no idea what you mean by this... but i really, really like it... discriptions are awesome.... i can see the castle...

 

 

revery

the dreamlost

"strike a beat, add repeat"

the dream continues...

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

Mistral

Viewer

(8/16/02 5:26:45 pm)

Reply The Lurker

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By the door, she stands afraid

Restless fingers toying braid

Takes a breath, then knocks on door

Frightened eyes stray to the floor

 

Half-regret assaults her now

Perspiration forms on brow

Shaking with a touch of dread

Stomach moans for piece of bread

 

Hunger, panic drone in ears

Seconds stretch to painful years

No response? Her heart sinks fast

Wond'ring if she'll come in last

 

With a sigh, she looks away

Strives to keep self-doubt at bay

Would the Wyvern let her in?

Failure would be heinous sin

 

Pressure sinks in, breaks her will

Fingers drum on window sill

Moments pass; still no reply

Time to say adieu and bye

 

Clenching fist, she checks her tears

Getting ready for the jeers

Runs down corridor with haste

No more time can she now waste...

 

 

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reverie

Initiate

Posts: 159

(8/16/02 6:30:08 pm)

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pretty...

 

rev...

Chew on this...

 

 

 

The average size of a jolly-rancher candy is 3/4 of an inch, by 3/4 of an inch...but the average taste of a jolly-rancher candy is immeasurable...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

revery

 

the dreamlost

 

"hiya..."

 

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Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

ahh, ic unrequited love... you make a connection to the person from a far maybe... yet you never were together... but he/she still stuck in your head/heart and mind 24/7... so you like AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH... I want you, why don't you want me? Why don't you notice... then like, No, no, no... get out of my head so i can live n'stuff... but it's too late 'cause their attention has become like unto a drug.... alway wanting more, more, more... which can be kewl so long as the other person is getting something out of it... and your both glowing and growing after the intially free fall dumbstruckness of it all, has worn off... 'Cause again, you don't want to confuse love with dependancy, because sure it's kewl for you... ya know getting your fix and what not, but you stealing the life force off the one that you think you love... stripping them of their energy that should be shared not taken... if ya know what i mean... but yeah i get what your saying the intial pangs do drive you crazy... they do... just try to hold back the storm long enough to see, if what your feeling is really worth it... cause you 'could' just be using the pangs as an excuse to feed your emotions... any emotions... that affirm that yes i'm in pain, but i'm feeling therefore i'm still alive...

 

um, sorry... i kinda went off on a tangic... but y'all asked...

 

revery

the dreamlost

"now that i've meant you, would you object to never seeing each other again" (aimee mann, deathly)

 

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Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?Edited by: reverie  at: 8/16/02 6:19:22 pm

um... think you just did... canid...

 

j/k... um give sec... hold on...

 

rev...

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

um okay... i'm not a great sage of advice or anything... but i've learned that it's self-destructive to confuse dependancy with love... and be careful what you wish for... because if you not ready for it, you just might get it, and in ways you never thought imaginable...

 

 

revery

the dreamlost

"souls speak best through inspiration"

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Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

hmm, seems to me about depression turning to self destruction/hatred maybe for a weird form of sadistic control of the pain... or using the external pain you can inflict on yourself to muffle the inner pain you can't quite seem to quiet... I recommending talking it all out... even if only too yourself... go out take a walk somewhere and let your mind wander too... help someone you like do something...floss your teeth, clean your room/car... do a make over/dress up just cause... 'because the day you stop taking care of yourself is the day you start to die... just my input... nothing more... if i'm off the mark... forgive me for my presumptions...

 

 

 

revery

the dreamlost

"once again we go around, around, around again..."

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Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

hmm, i get the vision of someone who offering love or friendship of some sort... but never had it returned, so recoiling he/she waits for someone now to do the same for him/her... but alas it never came... kinda sad i think... sometimes we can burn ourselves out by giving too much too soon, to those not ready to recieve it... a little moderation should would be better, so as your not so spent as to never give again... well that's my thoughts... good one rahsash

 

 

revery

the dreamlost

"all things in moderation"

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Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

hmm, soc... and plato would be proud...

 

 

rev...

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

Revised August 12, 2002

 

Oh Tell Me

 

 

Oh tell me

-one two three…

That can’t be

-one two three.

It’s not me

-gone.

 

I watch you falling over

-gone

I see you eye’s forever

-one two three…

That can’t be

-one two three.

It’s not me

-gone.

 

 

I see rain, falling over

-you

I wonder who belongs,

-it’s true

 

Oh tell me

-one two three.

That can’t be

-one two three

It’s not me

-gone.

 

 

I see your soft sweet shoulders

-bending down

I wonder who and what

-you found

 

That can’t be

-one two three.

I can’t be

- what you see…

It’s not me

-gone

 

 

 

Let talk of other problems

Make light, forget fovever

-gone

 

Oh tell me

-one, two, three

I can’t see

-you for me

It’s not me

-gone

 

 

 

 

Let’s start the whole thing over...

-now

Re-write forget do-over

-how?

 

Oh tell me

-one two three…

That can’t be

-one two three.

It’s not me

-gone

 

 

 

 

revery

the dreamlost

"pretty flower..."

the dream continues...

 

 

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

yeah funny how that works, huh?

 

rev...

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

**offers opesopacus a candle push back the night...**

 

revery

the dreamlost

"streams of things and tangle strings"

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Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

hmm, seems you gotta lot of pain... that sux... good luck working through it... writing it out helps... keep it up... here's a poems i wrote to cheer someone up on the pen one day with similar issues... maybe it will help...

 

Lighta (writen to cheer up someone)

 

Light a light, from within.

If nothing's left then find a friend...

 

If friends have gone, and all ignore

Then be friend, and soath a sore.

 

If tragedy, reflects all you see.

A hateful rant, a shuddered plea...

 

Then find a friend, from within...

Embrace your brain, with all it's pain

 

And learn to like, then maybe love

Your tortured heart, broke short of love.

 

The World turns cruel or kind to you,

Rarely true, you knew, you knew...

 

And wait a bit, you'll suffer it,

Till nothing's left, just counterfeits.

 

Tragic to see, reflected pleas

You hum along, Self hating songs.

 

Tragic to see, what does he mean?

Roll back the black, and turn it green...

 

Just look within, and find a friend.

Try start with fun, and bloom again.

 

Best too start small, a silly ball...

A kitten cat, turned acrobat

 

A spark to light, your candle bright.

And when you laugh, you'll hold him tight.

 

To enjoy again, that place within

More often now, your mirror proud.

 

To see you too, Your new, You knew.

What was never true, you knew, you knew

 

 

revery

the dreamlost

"burst forth the corners"

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Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?Edited by: reverie  at: 8/11/02 6:55:40 am

keep writing... layer by layer... evenutaully your find your core...

 

 

revery

the dreamlost

"cupid don't pull back your bow" (sleepwalker, wallflowers)

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Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

I like this... an idea of all the hateful things we think, but never show reaching a delighted dark muse somewhere... nice concept...

 

just give a small suggestion structure wise... maybe it's just the computer screen's bias... but i find breaking up the stanza is easier on the eyes... and illustrates rythem better... just my two cents...

 

and maybe

 

throw a 'though' in front of 'none of sinned' at the end... or an 'and' or something... sorry my brain cries out for another word there... too many years in band i guess... ending in candances and whatnot...

 

revery

the dreamlost

"energy should flow cyclic..."

the dream continues...

 

There is some poetry only written in the dead of the night

So that the words can be whispered

then hid out of sight

 

The wounds they would cause are but mirages in the sun

Hushed hatred flows like a maggot prayer,

no room (left) to run.

 

And the poem of a prayer is staining the muse's lips

Take a deep breath. Wait;

breathe life in little tasting sips

 

Who knows what poison had infiltrated us all now?

What is promised with pretty words,

they now disavow.

 

Although the darkness that looms can reach up to the sky,

Somehow, in the pitch,

its reach is not quite so high.

 

Murmur your words my children, let them flow in rivers.

Yes, they're acherontic;

but what delightful shivers!

 

Lift the prayers skyward, watch them drift away on the wind.

Cimmerian words are lost in the night, none have sinned.

 

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?Edited by: reverie  at: 8/11/02 8:02:46 am

hmm, had a little trouble following your rythems... oh well, wish i could hear it...

 

a little brutal for my tastes... but i like the structure of it anyway... kewl...

 

revery

the dreamlost

"i just a rose unpicked left to wilt on the stem of life..."

the dream continues...

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

Reality is. And truth is its reflection. And time is just one damn thing right after another... Interpetations vary just as eye glass perscription vary... yea...

 

 

revery

the dreamlost

"seek to find, your silly ryhme"

the dream continues...

 

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

beautifully put compentary on the mild tradigy of every day life left wasted...

 

 

revery

the dreamlost

"so what are words for?"

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Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

Fell...

 

So long and far away

I feel I see you everyday

 

There was nothing left to show

Told myself, It’s best to go

 

As the rain fell down on me…

 

 

It’s not that I can’t see

Even blinded by your melody

 

They’re just things I couldn’t change

Though I swear I’m not the same…

 

As the rain fell down on me…

 

 

The smile you gave to me

Returned with hope, turned silly tragidy…

 

With what I couldn’t know

Though I swear I tried to show

 

Still the rain falls down on me…

 

 

revery

the dreamlost

"argh"

the dream continues...

 

 

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?Edited by: reverie  at: 8/11/02 8:07:44 am

yep, yep... that's me... am real lazy...

 

rev...

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

what tamari?

 

 

rev...

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

Rev looks around at the newest little guest... "aaaawwwwwwww, i think i'm going into cute shock..."

 

Heh, well, welcome...

 

revery

the dreamlost

"so ahh, yeah..."

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Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

thanx...

 

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?

rev likes cheese with rice... mmmmmm, chicken fried cheese korea rice supped up to please fast food deprived americas...

 

...awww, looks like some has a crush...

 

**spins around, and around...**

 

they're fun...

 

revery

the dreamlost

"um, okay..."

the dream continues...

Which Colossal Death Robot Are You?Edited by: reverie  at: 8/1/02 7:08:09 pm