reverie
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14 DEC 2002… Theme of Signe
Long Distance…
Pulled apart by life again
But love found me, so I should grin
Though we live so far apart
-we live so far apart…
Staying brave by the countless days
Though, I cry within…
Just to hear you smile again.
-Just to hear you smile within
So over the phone and on the screen
She wrote me a letter, said I know what you mean…
A few moments longer and I can see you too
A few moments longer, for a dream to come true…
Oh why can’t it be today…
Why can’t it be today…
When, I want you.
-All alone,
Why go away?
Seen, so many miles
-So long
Wish you could stay
Don’t worry love
I’ll see you again
Forgive all the red eyes
And flash me your grin
A few moments longers
Not enough,
We need more…
Linger forever
Forget the world
We must soar…
When, I want you.
-All alone,
Why go away?
Seen, so many miles
-So long
Wish you could stay…
revery
the dreamlost
"dot, dot, dot." (aimee mann)
the dream continues...
Edited by: reverie at: 12/14/02 9:59:11 am
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**shudder** brrr, someone's got 'Frost' on the brain...
revery
the dreamlost
"oh sweet bird of repose" (sky heros)
the dream continues...
Edited by: reverie at: 12/8/02 7:06:31 am
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see...critic corner...
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the dreamlost
"it was foretold, delt, and fate..." (sky hero's)
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nice...
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pretty harsh... but then again so is most that lies underneath... is interesting to note that you can find that attitude you are discribing with every wave of immigrants that ever washed up on the america shores... funny how the past just keep repeating itself...
revery
the dreamlost
"turn, turn, turn"(byrds,dillion???)
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lol... i've actually did that with this one... sung in my head while running... though it was written as gift for my running friend... hope she like it...
thanx rahsash...
rev...
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been there... u paint a good picture...
watching parents crumble seems to spur us not repeat their mistakes...almost involuntarily which is what i seem to hear you say in this.
rev...
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you must hold a lot for him inside... a confendant, maybe? sound hard... it's nice that your there for him though...
nice work, enjoyed...
rev...
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bravo... u have a lot talent little one... ever heard of a slam poet? think you have the potenial to be one... look them up...
Also like how your poems seem to flow into one another... nice progession... keep it up
revery
the dreamlost
"oh sweet bird of repose" (sky heros)
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naw just wondering... old friends long forgotten, memory sparked rekindle and what not...
rev...
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good questions... life's just not easy ya know... i wish it was... but it's not... we sacrifice everyday to hold on to what little pebble of space we have... and sometimes you get tired...
revery
the dreamlost
"all is vanity"(ecc)
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I love your structure... great job... welcome... good luck with the love thing...
revery
the dreamlost
"spin it round again" juliana hatfield
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hmm, you wouldn't happen to have know a lady by the handle of green peace would ya...
rev...
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thanx... drew a lot from the wallflowers... on this one... melody-wise... too bad y'all can't here it... oh well...
revery
the dreamlost
"dot, dot, dot."(a. mann)
the dream continues...
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The Runner (29NOV2002)
Carry your torch into the night
Running so hard for the things that might.
Maybe, you’re scared, but it’s not what you fear
-Anyway
Do not fade away…
Though the night has grown so cold
Too much heart for hurt to hold…
And the miles become your friend
Looking back you smile and grin…
Though the flame may flicker,
-the flame may wave…
You'll keep running, all the way.
Look whose going, and you’re here to stay
-Anyway
Do not fade away…
So, carry your torch into the night
Running so hard for the things that might
Maybe you’re scared, but it’s not what you fear
-Anyway
Do not fade away…
revery
the dreamlost
"into the grace of god go I" (four squirrels)
the dream continues...
Edited by: reverie at: 11/29/02 1:38:45 pm
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ditto...
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Hiya ppl... Happy Turkey Day... Espcially to thoughs poors souls that have to work today... Aww, the drawpacks of shift work... Holy @#% i forgot the Cranberrie... NOOOOOOOOOO!
heh...
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the dreamlost
"Gooble, Gooble"
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yep... 'what' was forgotten... think the poems pretty cliche myself. That prolly why it seem familar, but not bad for 10min effort on a bench in the cold...waiting for a call...
rev...
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oh thanx... oh since your curious, the person i wrote it for just turned 25... and they enjoyed too...
revery
the dreamlost
"lo,lo,lo pal"
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written as a gift... 21nov02
Flicker
When you sing that silly song
A quarter’s lapse has come and gone.
Counting Candles, oh so bright
Seen to rival, a star-field night.
Set in flame, you face enframed.
Do not dismay, these daunting rays.
Within each flame, a scene will show
The time you know, from flicker to glow…
revery
the dreamlost
"time cannot be stopped nor revived"
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Edited by: reverie at: 11/25/02 7:40:38 am
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lol... fun, fun...
A world away, a kind of play
Forsaking life, to build a life
leaning in, to suck your soul
The smallest price, so pay the toll...
Numbers dwindle over time
Up to you, to hold the binds?
No, do not go,
We need you here
To build a quest, for all rest
Help you say? Why go away?
Our we not the ones you sought
The ones who channeled, trained, and fought
To fade away, in light of day...
To leave us now? How shall we play?
We need you dear, our matriarch
To learn us all the trails you fought
Your leaving now? So be it go...
Leave the house, to crumble so...
Twist and turn, and start anew...
Burn my eyes, i missed you too...
revery
the dreamlost
"a cave of thought"
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don't...
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Across the way…24NOV2002 1815…
Wondering boy across the way
Sits on a bench-
Looking for things
-he should say…
But he's not what you wanted
-So look a way
From the wandering boy across the way…
See him off writing
Frantic in style..
Searching his head
For things that will smile
But he’s not you wanted
-so look away
From the wandering boy
Across the way…
revery
the dreamlost
"strike a beat..."
the dream continues...
Edited by: reverie at: 11/24/02 4:03:28 pm
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kewl, thanx... was supposed to be an auto-writing ramble... but it turned into verse... oh well, why fight it... oh, oh... just got my cable modem installed(was moving at 28k before...) zoooooooooooooooooooom!!!!!!!!!!!! burn, baby burn... hahahahhahahahah!!!!!
heh,
rev...
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hmm, interesting... seems to point to rebirth thru today...charmic and darmic... kewl...
revery
the dreamlost
"it was foretold, delt, and fate" (sky heros)
the dream continues...