Psimon Posted May 1, 2003 Report Share Posted May 1, 2003 My Prison ******************* Walls, black as space offer up no light. No light upon my face So far from home yet no distance passed. No distance, still alone Chill, a fever, grips my aching heart. Aching forever, forever No release. No, not for my kind, no. The prison in my mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad Posted May 1, 2003 Report Share Posted May 1, 2003 Very interesting, comparing your mind to a prison. I've been known to do that before, but never did I get anywhere with it. Glad to see someone could take up the mantle. Very thought provoking for such a seemingly simple poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gjunon Posted May 2, 2003 Report Share Posted May 2, 2003 your mind is a beautiful thing... you can do anything once you set your mind to it... it can only be a prison if you allow it to be anyhow very well done congrats. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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