RIvaL Posted March 10, 2003 Report Share Posted March 10, 2003 hearts in the distance chance to meet once as friendship comes to be. shared pain diminishes the hope is bright and new and heartfelt words encourage. the emptiness relents the old wounds are healed and hope swells in the soul. and yet... a sadness there once was a sadness there will be however one can always hope. and yet... hearts in the distance cry tears of regret as all hope vanishes. the cruel path of life has stolen that which was precious and fighting loses all purpose. one heart is broken consumed with sadness and its kindly soul only weeps. a cold mask is born that smiles but doesnt rejoice and our story comes to an end and hearts, in the distance, remain. voiceless words are not enough. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vigil StarGazer Posted March 11, 2003 Report Share Posted March 11, 2003 Have to agree: long distances relationships really takes a lot of effort and for most, the effort does not become worthwhile... When you meet your love on the net, you feel at last someone could understand you, and judge you base on your personality and everything else except your material status and your looks.... You feel an exchange between the souls, because that's what it essencially comes down to, but it's so unfortunate that things don't work out because of trust.... there's so many things outside in your own world... the yearn for physical prescences and contact unfulfilled... the many nights wondering what each other is really doing and the stuff you ppl had already done... the difference came into play.. because both people are in a difference place, and thus sharing experience that neither each other did not face... Even if the couple passes all that, they have to meet each other eveuntually, and when they realized that each other didn't meet their standards they have to split... in a way love have to deal with the physical... the apperance, at least the wealth to support their ideal lifestyle... or just the difference in lifestyle itself... in that end internet relationship are not the solution, but just the ends to delay the inevatable... Truely Tragic.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rune Posted March 13, 2003 Report Share Posted March 13, 2003 Wonderful poem Rival. Excellent comment Lord. I think this is my favorite one so far that youve posted. Now when ya gonna put up your app? Rune teases Rival before giving him a hug. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RIvaL Posted March 14, 2003 Author Report Share Posted March 14, 2003 Lord: it's just as you said. quite sad really... I had hoped for so long that maybe this once *shrugs* oh well. Maron has always been a good friend and I cant begrudge her happiness, but I just needed to find an outlet of sorts. Thank you for commenting. It is greatly appreciated. Rune: This is my favorite poem also. I think someone told me once that the best writings are those that stem from personal experience because they have a ring of honesty and truth in them. That certainly seems to be the case with this one, at least for me. I had been working on my app, but decided to scrap it and start over with a different concept. The other one was lacking. Thank you for commenting, Rune. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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