reverie Posted May 11, 2002 Report Share Posted May 11, 2002 Hi... gyrfalcon suggested i expand my five minute improve poem... So i tried, but now i got a blinding headache from the effort(am sick), so this is as far as i got... -------------------------------------------------- Traveling this time again, Always going where, you have not been It's always sad to leave a friend Not always glad to begin again... But leaving her or him or them... Doesn't break the friendship in- -to scattered remnants of a dream Where laughter left and all seem'd mean Fore time need not, be stopped Nor revived To a place where friendship thrived. If you leave behind, so be it then Now go forward now, and make amends... For now you have a choice to choose To live with the past, with ghosts you use Or to smile upon, the gleam of dawn That lights the way, you trek upon... ------------------------------------------- Okay, that was fun... take care all, revery the dreamlost Edited by: reverie at: 5/12/02 6:54:46 pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canid Posted May 11, 2002 Report Share Posted May 11, 2002 I enjoyed reading this... it is rather optimistic. *Canid sits and smiles and wags her tail thinking happy thoughts.* *~~~~~~~~* Serious bit: A wolf is to be admired, for it is a symbol of all that is good, In this world you shall find none more loyal, kind and beautiful than a wolf, Be as the wolves! Be not ashamed of your curiosity, only the lack there-of. Silly bit: Curiosity killed the cat.... well, technically I did, but the point is that the cats' curiosity got me a free meal. Flipity-flopity bunny! Flipity-flopity bunny! Bunny is nice, As nice as can be. Chop him up and serve him for tea! -a song from an English pantomime Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted May 12, 2002 Report Share Posted May 12, 2002 *Gyrfalcon winces* I meant in the future, reverie, in the future! I'm sorry about the headache. ops: Still, good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reverie Posted May 12, 2002 Author Report Share Posted May 12, 2002 thanx canid and gry... oh don't worry gyr. the headaches gone. Um cause of my job i've moved 5 times in the last five years, so i usually end up leaving a lot of 'stuff behind. I guess it helps to try to be optimistic... Change is good i suppose, though exhausting... take care all, revery the dreamlost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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