Justin Silverblade Posted April 9, 2002 Report Share Posted April 9, 2002 This is a birthday poem I wrote for the story I'm writing (Call of the Tides). It's (supposed to anyway) really set the mood for the oncoming text/chapter. I'd thought I'd share: Celebratory Night Years go by, As days sleep. With joy this day, We all shall weep. Laughter brings The light of heart We toast to him This young upstart! Drink friends, and be happy For we celebrate tonight! Eventful night Party ways. Have happy life, And good long days. Hear the words, And find the air. Sail the notes, Without care! Sing friends, and be merry For we celebrate tonight! Express now, Regret later. Tonight’s the night To you we cater! Clap your hands Tap your shoe, Gather ‘round The night’s not through! Dance friends, and be joyful For we celebrate tonight! From a boy, This good man, Grows and lives; Does all he can. To you, lad, I drink an ale! Tonight we lift You high, and hail Lift him friends, tall and true! It’s he we celebrate tonight! Edited by: Justin Silverblade at: 4/9/02 9:24:11 pm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gyrfalcon Posted April 10, 2002 Report Share Posted April 10, 2002 Heh heh, its good! Even better, its not "Happy Birthday to you...", which gets tired after a while. =) *applauds* I like it, now write more or we'll have to do something horrible to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lord Seth Exodus Posted April 10, 2002 Report Share Posted April 10, 2002 Bravo! Very nice, indeed, I like the set up of it. But, I concur with Gyr. lets have more! -Seth Exodus Initiate of the Pen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tralla Posted April 13, 2002 Report Share Posted April 13, 2002 weee I'm tapping my shoe too! (well, my toes, but same diff.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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