NightFae Posted February 5, 2010 Report Share Posted February 5, 2010 Friends and family want a welcome home party, to celebrate my recent travels. But I do not wish to participate in their games. In their joy I cannot engage. In coming home, you see, I left behind love, and returned to redundancy. Websters has many words to describe great sadness, but few hit harder than "Welcome Home." -I know it's not by far my best work, and I'm sure there's a lot that could be done to it (I couldn't find a better word than engage, even though it doesn't seem to fit), but I'm a little out of practice. Just something that's been on my mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Posted February 12, 2010 Report Share Posted February 12, 2010 Ah, but if it's poor work, it's still better than no work at all. On the whole, it's not bad. I have to admit that I disagree with the topic of your subject, but who am I to criticize an idea? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightFae Posted February 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2010 Fair enough. I'm going to add a few lines to it...The second I figure out what they are. Just inspired by the fact that I'm visiting my love and I'm going to have to go home soon. I cannot describe how much I don't want to go and how glad I am that the snow here has prevented it for quite some time. But all good things must come to an end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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