Norman Posted August 27, 2008 Report Share Posted August 27, 2008 This ruin was once my solitude, The stone of a tormented youth, Forging the walls of hidden life, Holding me secure within. This ruin was once my world, The stone of completed growth, All I wished I held inside, Discarding all I didn’t want. This ruin is now my destiny, Slowly I rebuild my walls, Your love that once removed them, Has now left me exposed. This ruin will be my fortress, Again it shall stand tall, Each brick replaced reinforcing, I am better off alone. -Norman Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ran Yoko Posted August 28, 2008 Report Share Posted August 28, 2008 (edited) I like this. very nice theme, and the way you have it without rhyming, I think, serves it well. also, it makes me glad to know I'm not the only who does poetry without rhyming, which I can't do on demand, only when my mind is wandering. Edited August 28, 2008 by Sora Hikari Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Norman Posted August 29, 2008 Author Report Share Posted August 29, 2008 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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