Patrick Posted June 10, 2007 Report Share Posted June 10, 2007 Original topic An interesting start to your story Nyarlathotep. Makes me want more, so best of luck in the fight against writer's block. In terms of possible improvements: I spotted a typo or two, nothing major, but if you want I can send them over. I also felt that the cat part could have been elaborated more on, especially the emotions (or lack of) when he kills (or just throws out) the cat. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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