Regel Posted February 12, 2007 Report Share Posted February 12, 2007 Waves crashing on liquid stone Steam hisses and grottos moan The cooling mass sharp and edgy Dull, lifeless growing steady An island on to itself Forming on volcanic shelf Forged from fire pure desire A vision to inspire Expanding ooze of brilliancy Combine with saline majesty Rage and calm collide today As billowing clouds drift away Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Patrick Posted February 12, 2007 Report Share Posted February 12, 2007 I really liked this poem. Read nicely in my head and for me the rhyme worked really well. Especially liked the first two lines of the third stanza. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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