Sweetcherrie Posted May 25, 2006 Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 err...guess I'm starting to get a tad stressy... Marchin Ants Into my ears, and out my mouth Stamping feet, Crazy beat Marching dance, flapping hands Wanna flap the marching out Think I’ll go outside and shout Shout that I will so freak out Freak out with the marching beat Of thousand little stamping feet Into my mouth, and out my ears Gonna go and hide my tears Hide and shout, please get out Freaking hands, crazy dance Flicking at the marching feet Gotta break this friggan beat Stamping beat, crazy feet Out and in, and in and out Maybe I should close my mouth Close my mouth to scream and shout Flailing hands, sickly dance Shout my tears, and cry my ears Cannot stop these crazy fears Freaking out, better shout Stop! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetcherrie Posted May 25, 2006 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2006 After some revising and rereading (man writing is relaxing!) together with Morgane, some changes to be made Marchin Ants Into my ears, and out my mouth Stamping feet, Crazy beat Marching dance, kicking hands Wanna kick the marching out Think I’ll go outside and shout Shout that I will so freak out Freak out with the marching beat Of thousand little stamping feet Into my mouth, and out my ears Gonna go and hide my tears Hide and shout, please get out Flogging hands, crazy dance Flicking at the marching feet Gotta break this friggan beat Stamping beat, crazy feet Out and in, and in and out Maybe I should close my mouth Close my mouth to scream and shout Flailing hands, sickly dance Shout my tears, and cry my ears Cannot stop these crazy fears Freaking out, better shout Stop! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Regel Posted May 26, 2006 Report Share Posted May 26, 2006 I read this entire piece smiling. I grew up as a kid with out Nintendo, computers or even cable and spent many an hour watching the marching of these tiny creatures feet. My fanscination was as great as the phobia you decribe in the poem. Alive or dead the idea of ants methodically marching in one opening and out the other would drive me insane. I very much like the pace and the venacular you used to illustrate the anxiety. A wonderfully odd piece. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Katzaniel Posted May 26, 2006 Report Share Posted May 26, 2006 Huh. And I saw the whole thing as an analogy to the never-ceasing stream of events that life will throw at you... Either way, it was enjoyable. - Katz, stopping by on the way to a WW post... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted June 1, 2006 Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 *shudders* I read and felt the ants good one sweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetcherrie Posted June 1, 2006 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2006 I read this entire piece smiling. I grew up as a kid with out Nintendo, computers or even cable and spent many an hour watching the marching of these tiny creatures feet. My fanscination was as great as the phobia you decribe in the poem. Alive or dead the idea of ants methodically marching in one opening and out the other would drive me insane. I very much like the pace and the venacular you used to illustrate the anxiety. A wonderfully odd piece. *chuckles* It was driving me insane at the time. Those are the moments I am really thankful I can write most of it out Huh. And I saw the whole thing as an analogy to the never-ceasing stream of events that life will throw at you... Either way, it was enjoyable. - Katz, stopping by on the way to a WW post... Well, they get caused by those things life will throw at you, and maybe they are those things. I know this only happens to me, when I'm at the point of being so busy that you just do nothing, because you've lost overview. *shudders* I read and felt the ants good one sweet *grins* yay...err...sorry, but they were supposed to do that Thanks guys Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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