Azuran Posted January 21, 2006 Report Share Posted January 21, 2006 Fear the infinite cycle of endless tiersFall into perfect liquid spheres, suspendedIncredulity, whence innocence burns throughAnd through the loop of exit to entrance pollsSoftly at your heart, an eternal yearling eweCan't understand why you don't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweetcherrie Posted January 21, 2006 Report Share Posted January 21, 2006 I like the way this poem is layered, layers piled on top of each other, and running next to each other. It says so many things at the same time, and leaves it up to the reader to pick out his or her meaning. The choice of words rolls through my head, and I enjoyed reading this. Mainly what this poem told me is things about peer pressure and naivety, feelings I know, recognize, and sometimes even fear… The threshold to take decisions is different for all of us, and I think that in the end it’s mainly ourselves that wonder why we do, or do not do things. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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