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bronchitis


Ayshela

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I'm icy cold. Inside, outside,

there is no difference now.

I've kept you pushed away

as breath is forced from

ragged to smooth.

Easy now.

My grip eases as a

shallow breath flows

gently through, giving me

one moment of peace before

I pay for inattention.

My grip has eased. Now

icicle tendrils twine through

my aching chest, still

quivering from spasms,

and again I begin to cough.

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Well that ain't good. Erm... the bronchitis, not the poem. The poem was quite good.

 

Shuffle yerself off ta bed, or the doctor, or both, or either! Or something!

 

*falls on his face*

 

Don't make me come down there. I *will* bring soup.

 

:P

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