Lone Shadow Posted January 17, 2005 Report Share Posted January 17, 2005 (edited) You… Me You Me Attraction Infatuation Together Life... Conflict Understanding Compassion Commitment Trust Love... Eternal Ecstasy Me You... Posted on behalf of a friend. Edited January 17, 2005 by Lone Shadow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gryphon Posted January 17, 2005 Report Share Posted January 17, 2005 I love this. When I read it, I see in it's simplest form the progression of a relationship from it's earliest stages into the blossoming of a solid love. What I like most about it is the way it implies a degree of realism and being true to life by indicating the conflict that tends to happen in relationships as both people grow. It is from this that lasting togetherness is made. Of course, that's just my reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragonqueen Posted January 20, 2005 Report Share Posted January 20, 2005 The style of this poem seems very modern to me. The stark simplicity of it, how it sits alone on the page, waiting to be read, demanding little, but simply expressing its sentiment. If that makes any sense at all. And of course, I love the poem. I like the way you stuck to one word a line, and as I read it it seems very real; I can see the emotions, or images, or whatever, in my head. An unbelievably cool poem. Of course, this is just what I got out of, muddily expressed as always. Very beautiful and something I could read over and over and never get tired of. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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