cryptomancer Posted November 21, 2004 Report Share Posted November 21, 2004 Spacing my hands to encompass The crisp softness of life, That beneath my gentle fingers slips, As I trace the beauty of you. Touch of searching patient love, That learns each subtle curve, and kink Taste of longing upon the kiss That lets me of your beauty drink. Where in the embrace Did I find your heart? Pure, subtle gift of love, Cherished as crystal and silver wrought, By hand of spirit’s fire spun. Gift given, never won. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WrenWind Posted November 22, 2004 Report Share Posted November 22, 2004 *applauds* I really like the sentiment of this pieace ane the way it flows Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YanYanGanaffi Posted November 22, 2004 Report Share Posted November 22, 2004 It's pieces like this that make me wish that my peotry skills were better then what they are. Nice work, Crypt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gryphon Posted November 22, 2004 Report Share Posted November 22, 2004 As usual you've employed your gift to good measure. When I read this work of yours it generates in my mind echos of people and places, memories out of my own experience. Well done wordsmith, it's amasing how you manage to touch the heart so masterfully when you write. Had I a tenth of your skill with words I'd count myself a talented Gryphon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
YanYanGanaffi Posted November 22, 2004 Report Share Posted November 22, 2004 As usual you've employed your gift to good measure. When I read this work of yours it generates in my mind echos of people and places, memories out of my own experience. Well done wordsmith, it's amasing how you manage to touch the heart so masterfully when you write. Had I a tenth of your skill with words I'd count myself a talented Gryphon. If nothing else, we have a butt-kicking Gryphon. That's got to count for something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mynx Posted November 22, 2004 Report Share Posted November 22, 2004 A butt-kicking Gryphon who's in a relationship with a psychotic Mynx... Count for something? It's just plain fun! *picks up scythe and runs off cackling madly* (OOC: I think the exam stress is getting to me....Stupid Romans) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cryptomancer Posted November 22, 2004 Author Report Share Posted November 22, 2004 *grins at Mynx* So that would be a case of "When in Rome, ...... Napalm them?" *offers large chemical knowledge and box of matches* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Salinye Posted November 24, 2004 Report Share Posted November 24, 2004 LOL I'm laughing at the last comment made. Now, about the poem. I thought it was very sensual and intimate. To me, it only brought to my mind one image. One that could only be felt between two people truly and intimately in love. Being the romantic at heart that I am, I very much liked it. Thanks, winged one. ~Salinye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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