Loki Wyrd Posted September 16, 2004 Report Share Posted September 16, 2004 (edited) This is about my favorite season--in a roundabout way. It's not quite here, but it might as well be. An underlying sense of melancholy Is carried on the wind, Blows among the leaves-- And, in a way, I am with it. Resentment of the summer wells up, in fury, Deepening the darkness of the rain clouds. My thoughts are saturated in their ostensible bleakness, But encouraged by the intensity, The pure feeling of it. I am the fall. Wrapping my arms around you, With a tinge of a chill, Because you know it won't last. I just wrote that this morning. Nothing particularly special about it, I just felt like sharing. Edited September 16, 2004 by Loki Wyrd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tamaranis Posted September 17, 2004 Report Share Posted September 17, 2004 Oh, it's here alright... I think that's mostly how fall seems to me as well, but I just can't abide anything that's a prelude to winter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loki Wyrd Posted September 17, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2004 (edited) Here's another one I felt like sharing. I wrote this last night. With a forlorn smile I peer up at you, Through the locks of hair Falling down around my face; The peculiar tilt of my head Allowing me to see only so far-- As far as I need to To see you. Is there any way to space these things so I don't have to have it hugging the left-hand side? Edited September 17, 2004 by Loki Wyrd Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appy Posted September 17, 2004 Report Share Posted September 17, 2004 there used to be, and then the board moved.. now it's not working anymore *wants her center-feature back* I like both poems btw. Smooth read like usual.. very vivid image with the last one. Thanks for sharing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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