average thursday night

[_Zen_]

however many tales you told me

i always could accept

the things that happened before me

i didnt need you to regret

 

now im faced with a new test

something here and now

and im trying hard to let it go

although i dont know how

 

maybe i was foolish

to think you'd change for me

or maybe i assumed too much

about how this was going to be

 

and then i hear your sobbing

and i forgive you in a second

i thought i thought of everything

but this i hadnt reckoned

 

and now i hear the details

now im not angry, but sad

that someone who you trust

would dare treat you so bad

 

and i wish this hadnt happened

and i know that you do too

and im trying to ignore it

but its so hard to do

 

i have no ground to stand on

you're not even mine

but you're not surprised

by my silence on the line

 

but its not enough

to make me let go of you

maybe it is something that

i was supposed to go through

 

a little taste of reality

when my head's up in the clouds

im not going to let go of you

but i'll let you bring me back down.

[Mynx]

Nicely written.

good even rhythm and I felt the emotions in the piece.

Makes me think of a song I've recently come across...

"...and I know you'll catch me when I'm falling"

~Catch Me - MIC~

 

...Tralala...

[Parmenion]

Excellent work Zen. It paints a very vivid picture to the reader of the hopeless situation of a friend who yearns to aid another friend with troubles of their past with the knowledge that all they can offer is the comfort of their friendship against the storm of bad memories. And sometimes thats all a person needs. Well done