BlackCagedHeart Posted August 26, 2004 Report Share Posted August 26, 2004 "Distressed" (This is a package built for the ages) Slit my wrists And watch me sit Staring at a wall Pushing me Closer to death Knowing I won't fall Look at me Stare in my eyes Put me to the test Fuck me up I know I'm wrong I'll never meet your best Listen to me Slashing my own Killing myself dear It's all you Lost and confused The voices that I drear {I tried a new ryme scheme here. Lemme know whatcha think} "Slashings of a different time" Slashings of a different time A knowing fault In which was mine Cuttings on the same old wrist A pretty picture Fucked up twist Body of a different kind All mixed up new scars from time Slitting deeper every time the cutter's worst a loss in time [i don't know....abstract poetry perhaps?] "Beautiful" Listen to your voice Tell me what you hear Tellings of a horrid past And nothing but your drear Look into the mirror Tell me what you see A body covered in scars That noone else can dream Taste your tears of plenty INside of their moist Saltiness and beauty In which you had no choice Breathe in air of which I breathe Tell me how it feels Doing things that harm not help Does anything feel real? Touch my hand please, beautiful Know you have a chance I'm always here beside you To try and make these matters end {written for a friend of mine who I want and try to help but she decided to forget me and it hurts inside} More to come when I'm at home! I'm at a friend's and alot of my poo-ems are in notey-notebooks there, so yeah. <love> BlackCagedHeart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
purple_shadows Posted August 26, 2004 Report Share Posted August 26, 2004 It's good, but also sad. Reminds me of what I used to write a long time ago. i hope all goes well for you and your friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Morbid Angel Posted August 26, 2004 Report Share Posted August 26, 2004 wow! awesome emotion! I liked the new rhyme that you tried. Good Luck to you and your friend! (they are very lucky to have someone like you, even if they don't realise it themselves yet.) Morbid Angel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackCagedHeart Posted September 6, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 6, 2004 I <3 Morbid Angel. BlackCagedHeart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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