WrenWind Posted August 23, 2004 Report Share Posted August 23, 2004 Candle light shining Through blood red wine Leaves a jewel of light on white Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Appy Posted August 23, 2004 Report Share Posted August 23, 2004 that is just brilliant.... the picture in my head is perfect with these words.. thank you for those emotions *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gryphon Posted August 23, 2004 Report Share Posted August 23, 2004 Syllable count and all that kind of thing aside... I believe this to be the very essence of a Haiku. The perfect capture of a single moment for all to experience in your words. Very nicely done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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