Salinye Posted July 9, 2004 Report Share Posted July 9, 2004 Well, this may or may not be right, but being a poetic newbie, I did what came to mind. :0) This is my first attempt at a sonnet. As you kiss me this warm day in spring Your lips meet mine with gentle longing Caring fingers entwine my hair Songs of praise my heart doth sing Stretching my hand to caress your face Your jaw a symbol of your strength Tilting your head into my sweet touch My heart doth soar in your embrace Parting I sink within your eyes Therein lie possibilities endless This first of most precious moments Love my heart doth not disguise With this kiss my soul just knew There is no living without you. Well, I can't say I'm satisfied with this, but I can say I gave it a try, neh? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mynx Posted July 9, 2004 Report Share Posted July 9, 2004 Wow Very very cool Sal I like muchly Damn, why do I always make friends with the good poets?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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