Tamaranis Posted June 24, 2004 Report Share Posted June 24, 2004 Maybe if I start the thread, some of our excellent reviewer types will review it. The thread certainly has a lot of views. It's getting read for sure... I suck at reviewing things, but I'll give a little bit of something you might technically consider feedback. The woman's hand shot upwards into Gavin's gut, nails like steel tearing through the soft flesh of his belly. He felt her hand as it moved upwards into his chest cavity, deftly found his heart, and squeezed. I did not see that coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yui-chan Posted June 24, 2004 Report Share Posted June 24, 2004 Tamaranis, Actually, there is already a thread for feedback to 'Where Gods Fear'. It's in the Writer's Workshop. Would you like your post spliced into the other thread? Similarly, Finnius, would you object to moving the other thread into the Critic's Corner? It can stay where it is, but I think it'd fit better in the CC. It's up to you. Playing Moderator, ~Yui Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finnius Posted June 24, 2004 Report Share Posted June 24, 2004 Yui-chan, I understand your feelings on the matter. I had placed it in the WW because I wanted serious 'this should be changed' feedback, however, I am not in the least averse to random drive-by commentary like Tam's. So with that said, do with it what thou wilt. Makes no difference to me, and it might get better feedback here. /me sets mode to +difficult. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tamaranis Posted June 24, 2004 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2004 Eh, I wouldn't have offered random "drive by" feedback if I'd been aware there was already a thread... Just delete this one, if you'd be so kind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Finnius Posted June 24, 2004 Report Share Posted June 24, 2004 But... but... I liked Tam's comment... /me huggles the comment and remembers it always. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tamaranis Posted June 25, 2004 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2004 Well maybe move the comment and delete the thead? I guess I could just repost the comment myself... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ayshela Posted June 25, 2004 Report Share Posted June 25, 2004 *giggles at Finn* if it helps.. i'll second the comment before the thread is deleted, though i'm too foggyheaded yet to have much more to say than that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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