Rock

[Appy]

Please

 

be silent

 

don't say a word

 

I cannot concentrate

on what you are saying.

Mindless babbling;

uninteresting matters

 

A frown on my forehead

for having to ask you

again what you said

or what you really meant

 

Arguing about nothing

Annoyance with wording

Increasing distance

on every syllable

 

But

 

be silent

 

don't say a word

 

I'm concentrating

on us touching.

Feelings close in;

only you matter

 

A smile on my lips

for experiencing warmth

again from your body

or your breath on my cheek

 

Tranquility, doing nothing

Relaxing without a word

Increasing closeness

with every touch

 

..I love you

 

who is my rock;

my safety lock;

 

in every storm of emotions..

 

 

[06 maart 2004, Leverkusen]

Edited October 20, 2014 by Appy

[WrenWind]

*smiles*

 

 

Tranquility, doing nothing

Relaxing without a word

Something that is so very hard to do but so rewarding when you can.

 

 

 

I liked this very much Appy.

[Appy]

~ thank you, and you are so right! Been revising a little, tell me what you think! Biggest change is the last few lines.. ~

Rock

Please

be silent

don't say a word


I cannot concentrate
on What you are saying..
Mindless babbling;
uninteresting matters

A frown on my forehead
for having to ask you
again what you said
or what you really meant

Arguing about nothing
Annoyance through wording
Increasing distance
with every syllable


But

be silent

don't say a word


I'm concentrating
on us touching..
Feelings close in;
only you matters

A smile on my lips
for experiencing warmth
again from your body
or your breath on my cheek

Tranquility, doing nothing
Relaxing without a word
Increasing closeness
with every touch



..I love you

my solid rock
and safety lock;

in every storm of emotions..


[08 maart 2004, Leverkusen]


~ PS: I would still like to change the title... but can't come up with a better one.. any suggestions? ~

Edited October 20, 2014 by Appy