dragonqueen Posted February 23, 2004 Report Share Posted February 23, 2004 The beat, the beat. Can you feel it? Feel it in your toes, Feel it in your fingertips. Move your feet To the beat, the beat. Pick up your feet and dance To the beat, the beat. Can you feel it now? Feel it in your body, Feel it in your soul. Dance faster, faster To the beat, the beat. Give your self to the beat, the beat. And dance, and dance, and dance To the beat, the beat. Become the beat, the beat. Tell me, can you feel it now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yui-chan Posted February 23, 2004 Report Share Posted February 23, 2004 I can't feel the beat. I'm very sad about that, because I know that it's likely to have much more to do with my broken little brain than your enjoyable poem. I think I am missing a few poetry muscles. I'm sorry. ~Yui Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beautiful Nightmare Posted February 25, 2004 Report Share Posted February 25, 2004 I can feel it yey really good poem!!! I like the way it repeats it gives the poem its rhythem! I love it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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